Again with the presentation boards for this brief I'd got it wrong. I'd started off trying to guide the viewer through my project. I'd included lots of text almost describing everything and crammed in all my images over four boards. There is just too much going on in too little space. I got valuable feedback from the crit and came away feeling far more confident with them and a focus of how I could improve them. I also knew I needed to follow the bookend method of having a really strong impact board first and a strong image board to end with. Looking back now, these aren't very well thought out...
Thursday, June 3, 2010
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